@Euan Oh hell yeah. This turned out great.

I like how you've left enough wiggle room to read the Fugitive as Pre-One (she's a guardian of the edge from The Past) OR Season 6B (she recognises Susan, who doesn't recognise her). I genuinely think half the fun of her conceptually is the sheer amount of continuity snarl that she represents and how she could work but doesn't work entirely as either

God I love the Young First take. The scene of him meeting the TARDIS for the first time and deciding to sneak off with her is just plain Good Doctor Who. Got me a little teary

"I've never had to say goodbye to the sky before" is an incredible line

lol dang I didn't realise quite how much echo there was on my recording until hearing everyone else mixed in too

I'm pleasantly surprised by how well the Angela Morley cue works in this slightly cheeky new context. It's also exactly the kind of thing that gets me in particular to sit bolt upright and do the Pointing DiCaprio meme