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@stuartyeates@cloudisland.nz Good work! I was amazed that they managed to get the panel for the exhibition - I can only imagine the conversations it took. Good on both the institutions for making it happen, imo. Courageous move. Specific feedback for you to do with what you wish: - it took me a while to realise the name of the article is also the name of the piece. Maybe something like 'the unaltered panel [name] was originally part of [etc etc]. the panel was altered in place [etc].] 'I think i was struggling here because the name of the piece only received the name when it went on exhibition at Adam Art Gal? (but then, I know the journey that panel has taken so someone coming to it for the first time might not have the confusion that I had.) - last line para 2. "all charges were drop" change to "all charges were dropped" - Would it be useful to add the dimensions of the panel? - Do you want to mention the theatre show that was inspired by Te Wehi's experience in remand? https://www.theatreview.org.nz/production/ration-the-queens-veges/