Post #3399399
2026-06-17 15:08 UTC
...otherwise important. Also, viewpoint characters' thoughts have way more flavor than the underlying narrative voice — but again, that's a contrast.
Finally, the level of swearing is generally low-ish. Margot and Carlos both have children, and have trained themselves not to use four-letter words (Carlos was never that much a fan of them; Margot had a harder time making that adjustment). Angel and David swear about as much as the average... 3/4
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@kagan@wandering.shop 2026-06-17 15:08
...modern American adult (and in ways that fit their different backgrounds). Jessie is kind of a walking F-bomb factory. And as a bonus in terms of color: I have a whole lot of people of color in my story. Just like San Francisco does in reality. 4/4 #WritersCoffeeClub