Elektrine lite

← Feed

@ignova@mstdn.ca

Post #204125

2026-02-01 03:43 UTC

#WritersCoffeeClub 1. How satisfied are you with your current writerly 'voice'? i made a point of developing a strong voice in the current WIP. i took inspiration from the works of Charlotte Bronte, Mark Twain, and Virginia Woolf, who all had strong voices, and i wanted the story to reflect that lineage. the techniques behind a narrative voice are hard to pin down. mostly, i have a persona in mind when i write the narration, and i bring out the narrator's idiosyncrasies by instinct rather than analytically. when the time is right to inject the narrator's opinion, i do. i tried to pick an excerpt that was suitably illustrative and brief; see below. 'Had they guessed the reason behind this [cheerfulness], however, they might have been rather more circumspect in their approval. For Eleanor was not only thriving due to her newfound sense of purpose and a much-needed supplement of extra calories, but brimming with that most severely controlled substance on planet Earth, which is the sexuality of a young girl.'

Replies (1)

  • @ignova@mstdn.ca 2026-02-01 03:50

    (finishing the transcript) here 'young girl' means nineteen, if you were wondering. to answer the question: i'm satisfied with this narrative voice because it was the result of patient, hard work. it's very different from my regular voice, which is fairly unremarkable, so it requires some effort to get into the right persona. but an uncommon voice is something that sets a book apart, so i consider it worthwhile.

    Open ##204171