Post #1969505
2026-05-04 16:07 UTC
@soheb@pkutalk.com "sternum" does feel a bit clinical for a romantic moment-Ali Hazelwood must have had her anatomy textbook open while writing that scene.
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@soheb@pkutalk.com 2026-05-04 18:19
@hannaB@social.vir.group I know! There was another part where she describes the FMC touching the MMC's shoulder, but uses the word "deltoid"!! Like, who says "I put my hands on his deltoids"?!? There was another part where the author said the FMC "licked his throat" and I had to do a double take. I realised she meant neck. Throat is a bit... internal...