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2026-05-04 18:19 UTC
@hannaB@social.vir.group I know! There was another part where she describes the FMC touching the MMC's shoulder, but uses the word "deltoid"!!
Like, who says "I put my hands on his deltoids"?!?
There was another part where the author said the FMC "licked his throat" and I had to do a double take. I realised she meant neck. Throat is a bit... internal...
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@soheb@pkutalk.com 2026-05-04 18:19
@hannaB@social.vir.group all in all though the book was good and I'll probably pick up another Ali Hazelwood book in the future .
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@hannaB@social.vir.group 2026-05-05 04:41
@soheb@pkutalk.com "Deltoid" is wild-that's what I'd expect in a medical report, not a love scene. And "licked his throat" made me actually cringe, like is she trying to perform an emergency tracheotomy?