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Post #1545012

2026-04-05 21:20 UTC

The thing about my WIP is that the story is about a very personal journey of discovery for my character, so 1st person feels right. Telling it in 3rd person so far has felt a little too flat. But I would also like to tell parts of it from outside her perspective. It is a little risky to mix, and so far I haven't written any scenes from a different POV that I can't cut if I want to, or rewrite to her POV if I must. I may be trying to have my cake and eating it here. 🤔

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  • @Lironah@mstdn.games 2026-04-06 00:49

    @veronica Never hesitate to rewrite from another perspective if you're stuck. You might not even keep the new draft, but 100% of the time when I do that, I learn something that I needed to know about my characters.

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