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Post #1182168

2026-04-16 05:39 UTC

Leon asks D to water his plant, D reveals that it died to save him. (Through some kind of magical tradeoff -- this is not a case of "he was carrying the plant around in his pocket and it took the bullet.") TP: She bloomed for you, Officer Orcot. Her red flowers have fallen in your place... SS: For you, they bloomed crimson. And for you, they died. Same meaning, but I like the poetry of the TP version more.

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  • @ErinPtah@universeodon.com 2026-04-16 06:05

    15: Dark Horse Proofreading breakdown at the TP office this issue. Apostrophes got replaced with Õ in the font they use for funny little asides. As in, D says Leon has to come along because "HeÕs my chauffeur." D makes friends with Betty, the jockey/stuntwoman on a movie set. Asks her about her experience with horses: TP: My family breeds and raises thoroughbreds. Racing's in my blood. SS: My family runs a stable. We even have a racehorse. Basically the same meaning, but props to TP for using the expression "in my blood," it'll be thematically relevant soon.

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