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2026-07-24 21:11 UTC
ODYSSEUS, LOUT
Odysseus, lout, sucking up to
Goddesses, lording it over women.
Male chauvinist incorrigible,
Vain, vengeful, humourless, dull
Spinner of complex lies for their own sake,
Ill at ease with the day's truth.
Merciless sacker of cities beyond necessity,
Generous with your companions' lives.
Raconteur. Survivor.
Deliberately Homer
Re-strings his lyre to Woman's waning
Moon. Loosens those gold hexameters
To praise, half-praise the mercenary
Soldier's sly return to Ithaca.
Penelope at mysterious forty
Among her chattering maids in that sea-open,
Sun-filled, salt-sweet chamber
In her high tide of beauty spins, unspins.
Toes neatly spliced in sandals of soft gold
On marble, silk, fleeces of new-born lambs
She lunches with the girls on pomegranate-seeds,
On milky kid, and amber wine. Sometimes alone,
Sometimes with men.
Thug, Odysseus!
Having slaughtered without compunction
Despite their frank and winning, well-phrased pleas
All the young Suitors your competitors
(Boy-bard excepted, spared to sing your praises)
Unconcernedly you arranged to strangle
Those twelve of your wife's maidservants
Who'd had affairs (so said the old nurse spitefully)
With twelve young men you'd just shot arrows through
Using that monstrous bow no man but you
(Hero Odysseus) could bend to string.
Odysseus, you forced those women
Moaning with fear, to wash down with sea-sponges
All that blood from the terrace, clean the tables,
Then collect and put tidy the warm bodies of the killed.
This done, you got Telemachus, your subservient son,
To hang the girls up on their own washing-line
Drawn taut, like "a row of skylarks caught in a net."
The girls' feet, you noticed, for some moments danced
Odysseus, you should have died at Troy
In flight from Hector. Or in your mocking Horse.
Stayed with those pigs on Circe's isle, Aeaea,
Or in the wounded Cyclop's cave with rams.
And left Penelope to love again in Ithaca,
And every woman choose in the sun her man.
[Piboulède, Summer 1987]
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