Post #3739948
2026-07-11 11:44 UTC
@Siiin@pagan.plus your mind is full of thoughts and ideas and enthusiasm. Lovely. Don't miss out any of that in your class.
However, a headline is different, not just a dense version of same thoughts, another layer. You intuitively know it, so you ask.
The title should give a purpose, a motivation, a why. Not what and not how. It must be short; one thing, not a sequence. And motivation is an emotional thing.
This twist in thinking is very challanging. I also don't have a golden answer.
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@ard_the_rich@mastodon.art 2026-07-11 11:47
@Siiin@pagan.plus Some raw observations: "Practice" is a how. "Stewardship" sounds like a mixture of why and how, a promising candidate. "Learning" is a what. "Rhythm of the land" is a what, but it's emotional -> promising. "Whole" in the sense of feeling, is a strong why. "Awakening" is a what. Just brainstorming: "Wholeness in land's rhythm" "Fruition by stewardship"