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#WritersCoffeeClub day 14: Share a short paragraph (3-5 sentences) of raw prose: the more unpolished, the better. Everyone: What’s the most prominent signature in this draft? "Totally raw" means I'm pulling it from from my current efforts, in chapter 10. So, things previously established: * this apartment's layout * the fact Jessie's been avoiding calling her mother because she doesn't want to tell her she's lost her job * Jessie's 29 years old * she drinks a lot