Post #2640241
2026-04-23 19:21 UTC
- John: "Overall impression: strong, but a few things to tighten up."
- Ornella: no overall impression section
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@being@social.ornella.xyz 2026-04-23 19:25
"credible, not inflated" vs "rare and compelling" John: "What's working well The bullet points are genuinely good — specific metrics, real outcomes, and memorable quotes from stakeholders ("hours, if not days", "best feature Bobsled ever built"). That's rare and compelling." Ornella: "What's working really well The bullet points are genuinely strong. Concrete numbers and real quotes ("hours, if not days", "best feature Bobsled ever built") make the impact feel credible rather than inflated.