Post #1704981
2026-03-07 21:07 UTC
@jdking92 @tired_and_wired This is good. I think if there was better pronunciation of words it would be more understandable with certain parts of the song. I also think taking a slight pause between the chorus and the verses could add some more emphasis to them.
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@jdking92@dragonscave.space 2026-03-09 22:26
@ablade @tired_and_wired If you like, you’re certainly more than welcome to cover the tune with these suggestions included. Covers can definitely bring things to a particular tune!